Chapter Six
This chapter discusses a question I find myself wondering quite frequently - how do I help students improve their English writing? Since the first time I wrote my own lesson plan, the idea of helping my students become better writers has always been perplexing. Do I give my students a bunch of grammar handouts and require rote memorization? Do I have them write about something - anything! - every day? How much is too much to expect from students? Most importantly, how can I
motivate my students to
want to write?
Victor presented a variety of different strategies to help tackle some of my questions and really get kids interested in in the writing process. First of all, it is almost impossible to hold any student's interest with grammar assignments and required daily journals on prompts that mean little to nothing to them - if I had a nickel for every time I was forced to write about my favorite pet or childhood hero, I would probably be very wealthy! I really loved Victor's approach to writing. He gave his students a topic that impacted them and made them invest their time in it. By getting the students invested and engaged in the topic (their own safety!), his students were more willing to participate in the writing process.
My favorite part about his unit, besides getting the students interested, was that Victor started the letter to the Mayor as a class. Especially in the ELL setting, I think that group/class work facilitated by the teacher creates a low stress environment and encourages more participation. He made "fix-ups" and brainstorming ideas a part of the classroom every day. When students made mistakes, it seems like they would be less likely to withdrawal again and listen to the "editing crow." After the group/class work, Victor had his students write individual letters. Although each letter they would write would be different from the last, he set his students up with the tools they needed to create well-written letters. He also ensured that each student had help from both the teacher and their peers to fix any mistakes they may have come across.
Victor's purpose-based writing activity really made me think about what I was focusing on in my own lesson plans. Although it is important to note that not every activity or teaching method will work for each classroom, I think it is even more important to evaluate the plans we are creating to ensure that we are benefiting our students as much as possible. This comes from having a well-balanced plan; for improving writing, that may be differentiating writing styles (why students are writing), alternating between form and message (pick your battles!), and involving students in all three steps of the think, write, and revise cycle.
One of my favorite things to incorporate into the classroom to assess student writing is the student portfolios. I think it is a great way to get students involved in their own assessment. Portfolios are physical proof of what progress has been made and offers up something tangible that students can be proud of at the end of the school year. By adding specific writing assignments to the portfolio, it can be an effective way for teachers to see how progress is being made/not being made and beneficial when discussing what a student may need to improve upon.
Chapter Seven
Although I will most likely not be teaching at the 4th grade level, I really liked the way that Joellen took a proactive approach to incorporating both ELD and content material in her lessons. In her Shoebox archaeology unit, she used a variety of methods to engage her mainstream students while still providing enough background knowledge/support for the ELL students to also be engaged and comprehend the content material.
As like several of the other teachers in this textbook, Joellen began her unit with an attention grabber - the archaeology "dig" project - to spark her students' interest. In a high school English course, I could see myself introducing a novel like
The Crucible by Arthur Miller with a witch hunt activity or a role play that would have a similar effect. I would supplement these activities with my own demonstrations to link vocabulary to actions and create meaning for my ELL students.
I also really liked how she engaged her lowest-level ELL students in the material by guiding them through activities with the language needed for that day. I could see myself using this strategy in both a pull-aside and entire class setting. It is important to review vocabulary and certain idioms to enhance overall comprehension. At a high school level, this could look like wall-text and text-tours, or simple paired activities.
The most important things I took from these two chapters is to create activities and lessons that are engaging by offering multiple platforms for students to experience the material. Whether it is through various writing and drawing activities or turning a hands-on activity like the archaeology dig into a research project, students of all language proficiencies need a variety of mediums in order to understand the material.
Not only did Joellen require hands-on participation through the artifact dig, she also had the students discuss what they had found and write down multimodal descriptions. This was a fantastic use of the activity and required her students to engage with each other and help each other to understand what they had found. She also had the students organize their group's assumptions of the artifact prior to engaging in research which encourages students to think critically about the artifact and use their background knowledge. Finally, she ended in the research presentations for each group which resulted in a great discussion about how each of the artifacts were connected.
Drawing connections seems to be vital to the success of any ELL program/lesson. Without the connections to other content/lessons/core subjects, there seems to be a learning gap for ELL learners. Although it is nearly impossible to create these connections every time and with everything our students are learning, I think that it is very important to strive to make those connections in order to help our students reach their academic potential.